About this episode
Acclaimed short fiction writers Sarah Hall, Jonathan Escoffery, and Niamh Mulvey on building immersive worlds in compressed spaces, grounding stories in real human stakes, and writing openings and endings that transform both character and reader.
Timestamps:
(00:01:06) Sarah Hall, from Episode 161
(00:14:43) Jonathan Escoffery, from Episode 56
(00:26:40) Niamh Mulvey, previously unreleased conversation
You'll learn:
Sarah Hall's "keyhole" approach to short stories — and how the unseen world beyond the scene gives a story its depth.
Why trusting your preoccupations beats forcing a theme, and how over-awareness of your own subject can kill the fiction.
A technique for thickening a thin first draft: telescope into your character's childhood, then out to their future.
Why Jonathan Escoffery believes stories without real-world stakes will lose to equally crafted stories that engage with the world, every time.
How Escoffery pairs imagination with lived emotional experience to make unfamiliar settings resonate — and why personal growth feeds artistic growth.
What choosing a linked story collection over a novel taught Escoffery about pacing, pause, and propulsive energy.
Why Niamh Mulvey thinks showing off your best writing in an opening is a mistake — and what to do instead (start specific, name a character, put two people in relation).
A prompt for finding your story's urgency: ask "why this moment?" and aim for the energy of really good gossip.
How character desire shapes place and plot at the same time, so setting becomes what your character wants rather than backdrop.
Mulvey's "third element" — a character, object, or event seeded early that can emerge later to unlock your ending.
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Sarah's full episode and notes
Jonathan's full episode and notes
If I Survive You by Jonathan Escoffery
Hearts and Bones: Love Songs for Late Youth by Niamh Mulvey
The Amendments by Nia
